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The Constants Ep0pg2 by ~egorger:iconegorger:

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Changed up my inking style a bit for this one and think it worked pretty well.

I'm apprehensive about monologues, but I think I needed it here to slow things down since the first page kicked in so fast.

If you've been watching or have seen my previous OCT entries with Uriel, you'll notice that he's not the same evil grinning, scythe slinging psycho that I previously released. I hope I can convey a multiple murderer with some tact this time around, but we'll see.

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Uriel © me
Eitan Amitay © :iconeitan606:
Glen Miles © :iconzenrider:

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=Calicard Jul 12, 2009, 12:24:54 AM
I like the paneling. Especially panels 2 and 3.

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=Eitan606 Jul 12, 2009, 1:35:57 AM
There are some great things in this page like the first four panels BG with the inverted cops and the joke that the big guy calls Uriel a freak. XD
Some anatomy issues, and Glen's face is... something to work on. It's actually worth redoing it and reposting.
And as long as you're at it, Eitan's hand is too big and the thumb doesn't suppose to bend that way.

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You can't talk to me like that! Can't you see I am sexy?!
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~Mat-Lee Jul 12, 2009, 6:20:31 AM
really like the strong use of lines and heavy white areas.

The mood and panel layout is making this one of my favorite entries so far

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Art is about realization and reinvention
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~egorger Jul 12, 2009, 7:00:07 AM
anatomy fail!? I don't see it...anymore.

I think I got that hand right this time around, and I can show that thumbs bend that way! I have ref images! :iconohseriousplz:

Also, I think I made Glen a bit less arsefaced.

Thanks for pointing those things out, it's much appreciated.

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"The mayfly lives only one day. And sometimes it rains."

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~egorger Jul 12, 2009, 7:00:30 AM
Thank you. :D

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"The mayfly lives only one day. And sometimes it rains."

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~egorger Jul 12, 2009, 7:00:38 AM
Thanks :D

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=Eitan606 Jul 12, 2009, 8:26:11 AM
That hand looks better, I'll give you that.
You do have a tendency to make your hands big and thick, I'd recommend watching out for that. ;)
And I'm sorry man, Glen looks like a 50 year old woman. XD
It's something about the face, maybe too much details. Details are something you should REEEALLY be careful with. They could age the character by mistake. And the eyes, man... That was the first thing to pop into my sight. They're huge, long and have an ominous sight. XD

I really don't wanna drive you crazy like that, but I know you've been asking me a lot for crits. ^^;

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You can't talk to me like that! Can't you see I am sexy?!
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~egorger Jul 12, 2009, 8:45:56 AM
XC daaaaamn it. I'll get him right the next page, and yes, the eyes are friggin huge...

Maybe I'm trying to make him look too old. Or maybe it's because I'm trying to make him look like a black man without adding color... I'll figure it out soon. I'll do some concept sketches to flesh my version of him out a little better before the next page. If you're around, I might ask you for another crit, if it isn't too much of a bother.

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"The mayfly lives only one day. And sometimes it rains."

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~StalkedByDragons Jul 12, 2009, 1:38:08 PM
The inversion of the first and last panels in the first sequence works very well, Ego. The inking style you used for this page really brings it together! <3

I like the way Uriel describes his power. Don't be afraid of monologue. x3

Want moaaaaaaaaaaar. Keep going, Ego! :iconcheerplz:

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